WATERCOLOR - Place des Vosges - Paris

My immediate impression of this piece is a lovely sketch of a scene with a lot of life and movement. I enjoy the palette as the red is really set off by the gray-blues, though I tend to prefer brighter combinations this feels very successful.

You're able to bring out such fine detail in your work that I find this one almost disappointing in that way. The person closest to the viewer seems like a lost opportunity to add expression and reality to the piece. It feels very natural for the people in the distance to be this fuzzy but this individual could have been so much more to the viewer.

Most impressive is the far left wall that really creates the environment and helps set the stage so well. The far reaching distance that you've created using the ceiling area is good but the color shift feels a bit sudden.

The large white area contrasting with the rest of the composition leaves my eyes feeling unsure of where to rest, thus my appreciate for the far left side of this piece. It's an easy area to take in detail at leisure.